What say you to a silver poem? - silver projections 2009
"The sun was shining when I left"
Secrets of money,
Promise Necklace
whisper, whisper ... between the words,
Worlds Apart
Message midnight
Reciprocity, speed ...
Moment of hostility,
End and a song --
Inflection, projection, presentation,
Rinse bloodstain
Lullaby.
shows, hit, win Presses ...
Vox attractive.
lyrics arms, hands soaked,
Silver eyes
without blinking.
Friday, December 4, 2009
Silver Projections 2009 What Say You To A Silver Poem?
9 comments:
Hello E. ..
It is very good, maybe a little higher. Did you know that Amy has won the silver medal?
The judges in the semi-finals and the final saw the pen no poems, the title and the text.
You need to enter. Take a look at the forum today ... a new competition ...
That is really impressive. Sounds sound almost appealing harmony with it. I LOVE whispering, "whispered ... between words and worlds." They parallel the sounds of words in a very interesting, and if they intended or not, I think, quite frankly came to something very genius. Again, I love it.
This is brilliant. In fact, I know a song that went with ... Is rap (ISH), but listens to the rhythm of the song while reading.
It is a seduction in his piece, if read aloud.
"Muttered the words ... the sound
Worlds Apart
very well said.
I go ...
Sure, the sun shines
Alluring
I remain steadfast.
.. Well
I like
these
all words
inside
Brightness
Wet skin
in
Luna Sol
these
all words
inside
Brightness
Wet skin
in
Luna Sol
Very extensive use of descriptive words. Well done!
I say that everyone is wantin to get ugly ..
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